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This is Marie-Ange 87 year old
meet at La belle province
she has been married for 65 years with a wonderful man of 89 years, she has orrigine German

Voici Marie-Ange 87 ans
Rencontrée au restaurant La belle province
elle est mariée depuis 65 ans à un homme merveilleux de 89 ans, elle a des origines allemandes

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:iconthetopcrusader:
This one is my favorite of the two you've posted; her filling up more of the frame here definitely gives her a stronger presence (as the previous commenter mentioned). Also, it helps to show the detail in her face - all the wrinkles, the bumps, the crevices, everything. And her expression is so peaceful...and yet so powerful at the same time! I wouldn't necessarily give this photo high points on originality, but it's a beautiful capture nonetheless and is quite enjoyable to look at. You might want to try these in black and white too! A contrast boost can really bring out the facial details even more.
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:icongalaadm:
Hard to tell which one is best out of the two. In this one you were able to grasp her more deeply, her presence is stronger then in the other one, I think. Thought the other one might have a better composition of colors...hmm hard one. They are definitely both beautiful shots, bravo!
p.s. the centered subject issue doesn't bother me, in the contrary some subjects are better placed in the center, this law can't be generalized. As a matter of fact, there shouldn't be any laws, everything should be permitted as long as it works and it does here ;-)
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:icongrandspammer:
Very nice :)

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:iconbeyne:
I love this.
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:icontrippy4u:
such kind happy eyes. nice capture.

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:iconnorthboundtoloop:
This one is perfect. She's not at all lost in the background. I love it.
:iconwaterdelph:
Dans tes portraits, je préfère les "close up". Puisque le décor contient tellement peu de détails, c'est mieux quand le visage remplit plus la photo.
:iconbenoitpaille:
le vide c'est beau , et de toute façon mes photo son faite pour être imprimer en très grand format

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