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A stranger: Quebec Rainbow gathering 2009: Philip 67 years old


Vie dans une autobus scolaire qu'il a transformé en camper, est végétalien, ne prend aucune drogue, ne fume pas, ne bois pas, est en pleine forme. Un des homme les plus génial que j'ai rencontré. Fait germé ses propre germes dans sont camper, vas au Mexique à tout les année durant l'hivers... Un homme plein de sagesse que je suis allé voir à plusieurs reprise pour philosopher sur la vie .


Lives in a schoolbus he converted into a camp, he's vegan, doesn't take drugs, doesn't smoke or drink, and is in great shape. One of the most brilliant man I have ever met. Grows his own vegetables in the bus. Goes to Mexico each year.... A very wise man that I visited repeatedly to philosophize about life.

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I really like this image. It pulls me in through the man's eyes. (As it should as they are the gateway to a person's soul).

The first think I see are his eyes, then I move to the expression in his face and then I start to explore the experience/wisdom weathered into his physical person. The lines in his forehead, the texture to his skin, the suntan and melanin showing all over his body... Very interesting subject.

Emphasis is perfect IMO. I think the use of the shallow DOF covering only his face helps the viewer realize what this photo is all about. His surroundings make up who he is but they blend together behind him.

I love his expression. It's so soft and mellow. It makes me feel like this man really is at peace with himself and his surroundings. It makes me think he is full of patience and understanding and a care for creatures and the earth alike.

Technically, the post work is superb. Transparent. Great color, warm with soft, pleasing window (?) light. Great range of light and dark give it a contrast that grabs my eye immediately. I can definitely see the image was sharpened but they all need it. I am curious what lens and format you used to achieve this shot. Judging by the frame ratio, I'd guess 35mm with maybe a 35-50mm lens shot fairly wide open. The OOF area is a bit smudgy but not that noticeable. Honestly, I can't pick out anything that really bothers me. I can see everything I need/want to see and I can focus on the subject without any distractions.

Really, really, REALLY great image! I wish I had it in my own portfolio!
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stunning portrait, and the story only adds to it =)

forgot all my french though - so no help with the most of translation :(
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Vous savez qu'une recherche sur l'évènement en question sur Google nous dirige en premier lieu à vos photos? ^^

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you did it once again...stunning, simply stunning.

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Superb! + he looks quite like Gandalf.
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this is an amazing photo

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Lives in a schoolbus he converted into a camp, he's vegan, doesn't take drugs, doesn't smoke or drink, and is in great shape. One of the most brilliant man I have ever met. Grows his own vegetables in the bus. Goes to Mexico each year.... A very wise man that I visited repeatedly to philosophize about life.

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