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J'aime prendre de total inconnue est les rendre acteurs

I take totally unknown person and then do the players had ( like actor)

Yvon 89 year old
meet at La belle province
65 years of marriage with the beautiful Marie-ange

Yvon 89 ans
Rencontrée au restaurant La belle province
65 ans de mariage avec la belle Marie-ange

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:iconm-playc3ll:
I adore the atmosphere present in the background; the lights and colours flatter the subject set against them. It seems almost out of place and alien, which creates an odd mix-matching flow of scenery. Puzzling yet intriguing.

Your subject, the centerpiece of the photo as referenced in the title, deviates against the given job the title sets for him to perform. His charm and obvious confidence allows him to become a part of the photo instead of appearing like he is, indeed, some 89 year old stranger. It's not just the paradox of his boyish appearance that you managed to capture, but the beauty of the entire moment. Brilliant capture.

The top of the photo could have been better. The odd negative space, though welcoming to some, feels like it would look better muted or extended. Perhaps it's just the dimension that looks choppy.

This is a beautiful photograph that you should be extremely proud of-- I love the entire series but for some reason, I feel attached to this particularly excellent piece.
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:icondullface:
How you doin'

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:iconthetopcrusader:
The expression totally makes this shot...yet another amazing portrait!

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:iconjeremybrotherton:
This is great! Nice light balancing and great colors and contrast. I also like the facial expression.

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:iconbitkovf:
fantastic! i'm interesting - what lense did you use?
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:iconihsanalfikar:
gr expression :D
I like the bokeh :D
:iconthedarkroom-photo:
oh my goodness he is absolutely adorable. I want to hug him.


the colors are beautiful.

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May 5
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